Persuasive Writing By Jack 6MC

Lo: To write a letter using features of a persuasive writing

Dear Mr Jones, 

 I am writing to complain about no school trips in year six.

Year 6 have no money, so we can’t go on trips and visitors don’t in to help us with the subjects that we are working on in school.

As a result, the children in year 6 aren’t learning much from no visitors or no trips.

It has been proved, that you should, to do fund-raising they get money back so the children in year 6 can go on trips and so visitors can come in. So children can know more about what they are learning in school.

Although, a small amount of children understand the subjects that they are learning in school.

Could you please take care of the money you have and possibly share it with the year six children.

Yours sincerely children in year 6