Persuasive Writing By Qadeer 6MC

Tuesday 25^th February 2013    by qadeer

Lo: to write an effective persuasive letter.

Ward end primary                  

Dear Sir, Ingleton road

Birmingham

B82RA

  I strongly feel that, a motorway should not be built in curdworth; there are a number of reasons why.

 I strongly believe that if a motorway is built in the village this could lead to a complete loss of greenery. In addition car fumes would lead to children suffering breathing problems for their health. Doctors say that this is bad for you.

Some people believe that this could destroy wildlife and banish habitats forever could you let this happen to the animals? A quote from a curdworth person says” I don`t know why someone has done this it would be a tragedy if it was like this forever”

  A sensible idea would be not to have a motorway because the more cars there are the more accidents will happen. The children primary schools are in the middle of the village and the children will have to cross the dangerous road which can lead to accidents.

 Some people may think that the traffic in the motorway will reduce; others say that the pollution will destroy curdworth forever. A person has said” my son`s dying because of this motorway pollution please do the right thing take the motorway out my son will die” 

Overall, we should not have a motorway in curdworth .Surely you cannot deny that ideal wildlife will disappear forever-do you want this to happen. We hope you make the right decision. 

 Yours faithfully, qadeer