Persuasive Writing By Ibrahim M 6MC

Tuesday 25th February 2014  25.02.14

L.O. To write a letter using features of a persuasive writing.                                                                                          

                                                                                                                                                                                                     

Dear Mr. Jones,

I am writing to complain about the trips that are not happening in Year 6.

There hasn’t been any trips in Year 6. The Governor body does not have enough money for the school and that is a big problem. As a result, many children are concerned about their learning.

This clearly shows that Year 6 students are worried and they think that they will fall behind. If you don’t take any children on trips they will not be interested in their work or put any efforts in. Most of our parents would say ‘I am worried about my child’s future, so please take them on trips’. Children’s education is crucial and the SAT’s are very important as there coming up.

Most people would agree that there has to be trips and visitors (or other learning activities). If you take children on trips they will be more interested in their work.

We have some good suggestions for how to get money for the school: by funding, school reunion, cake bake off and other school clubs.

We all hope you take the matter seriously and reply to us as soon as possible.

      

Yours sincerely

Year 6/6MC/6PJ

BY MOHAMMED IBRAHIM