Persuasive Writing by Humza 6PJ

Tuesday 25^th February 2014

L.O. To write an effective persuasive letter.

Dear Sir,

I strongly believe that a motorway would be detrimental to the village of Curdworth.

First and foremost, if a motorway is built in Curdworth  , noise will become louder and carbon monoxide will increase . Therefore, there will be more sickness, such as asthma, in the area . Would you like it if children were suffering with asthma?

Only a fool would think of building a motorway in Curdworth.   A lot of sickness will take place, because of carbon monoxide.  There is a school risk of the school closing down as well, because of the sickness.

The churches will close down as well, because the people who work there might be sick or die and less people would work there, would you like the people to die in Curdworth? 

The motorway will make more traffic and gas, which would kill people in Curdworth . If there are a lot of motorways,  if there are so many traffics , then a lot of sickness will appear in Curdworth . Would you like everyone to be sick?

As a result, the workers should not build a motorway in Curdworth.  Curdworth could be destroyed, FOREVER !  People do not want to suffer asthma, breathing problems and sickness. Do you want to destroy Curdworth, forever?  

Your Sincerely Humza Ali