Tuesday 25th February 2014
L.O. To write a letter using features of a persuasive writing
Dear Mr Jones,
I am writing to complain that the Year six pupils are not getting any trips and there
have been problems, because of this, with their learning.
It is not that good
they are losing control and they are losing memory and concentration and they are doing poor work the year six teachers are not proud with it anymore so they need to do something about it.
can you pleas do something about it there wise it will get woes and woes and it is not helping them for there SAT’S test and there is nearly three weeks left until there SAT’S test and we need to do something about it NOW
by ASIF.k
Great piece of writing - well done
ReplyDeleteYou have worked very hard! This is a well-written piece of work :)
ReplyDeleteI would like to support your comments regarding Y6 trips.
ReplyDeleteWell done with the letter.