Persuasive Writing by Akash H 6PJ

Tuesday 25^th February 2014 

I am writing to argue that a monstrous motorway is going to be built in the picturesque village of Curdworth. I think it would be detrimental for this village. There are a number of reasons why the motorway should not be built;

First and foremost, a lot of habitat will be destroyed, particularly for birds. Already, over 60% of RSPB people are thinking the habitats will be disappear forever. Secondly, it could cause a lot of pollution and traffic. A lot of accidents could take place.Over70% of children are suffering asthma. Do you want the same to happen to your to your child? Over 60%of doctors think it could cause breathing difficulties.

A lot of deforestation and all the greenery will disappear. This atmosphere would be destroyed forever. Some people think that it would take them less time to get to their destinations; but however others say it would completely destroy the village. Surely no one wants that to happen, do they? 

In conclusion, I think the councillor should not support the decision about the motorway. A lot of parents are upset because they think their child could suffer an accident. As well as that, children can have breathing difficulties. Would you support the motorway, if you were upset and affected? I hope you make the best decision for your family and the community.

Please save this calm, marvellous place!

Yours Sincerely

Akash Hussain