Persuasive Writing By Shazaib 6MC

Tuesday  25th  February                                                      

 L.O. To write a letter using features of persuasive writing

Dear Mr Jones,                             

I am a year 6 pupil and I am writing to complain about having no money to spend on school trips throughout the year groups. The government need to provide some money for school trips   

there has been no money throughout the years how can we go on school trips? This is very silly. People have not got the proper education and when they work they  are very lazy.You people need to figure out a way to get some money.Or else we will have nothing and then the children will not get the proper education.

Surely nobody would disagree having a fund-raising day.People from different year groups could put some money into a bucket and when it is all collected  we might have enough to go on school trips.Or one the other hand some people could wear jeans and a top to school.And if they want to they could put a bit more money into the bucket if they want to.

If we don’t do this how do you think the children are going to feel they will fail in their SATS test and they won’t get extra support so we think that children should get

 trips because they learn more about there subjects.

                                          

I hope you like our idea about the fund-raising idea please give any more ideas if necessary 

Yours faithfully

pupil in year 6.