Persuasive Writing by Tamoor 6PJ

Tuesday 25^th February 2014                                                                   Ward End Primary School

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Birmingham

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Lo: to write an effective persuasive letter                                               

Dear Sir,                                                                                                         

I am writing here today to argue against the building of a monstrous motorway through the the heart of the beautiful, peaceful, curdworth village.

 First and foremost, the motorway should not be built because of the health issues that could occur. Motorways cause lots of pollution; the fumes from so many cars can cause health concerns, such as asthma. 

 Only a fool would think that we should we should build a motorway through the piqturesque village of curdworth .Mrs Roberts a mother of 2, said “my child died last year because of asthma and he was only 7!” Do you not realise that this habitat is home to several rear habitats. 

 With a motorway house prices will drop and we could never change this back again, what I this was your child living here?

We hope you change your mind about this  

 Yours Faithfully,                                  T.Hussain

                                          

                                                                      SAVE CURDWORTH!!!!!